Tomsan's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aftermath]

good..

not great. The left is very well done, but I am not so sure about the space craft. the shapes the colors and the set up seem less thought through.

I also dont really know whats happening. the dude in the front is checking something out, oke but the other is pulling a teammate out of the ground? I just dont 'get' the picture, but that can be insightful failure from my part.

of course the above doesnt make it a bad picture.

Occluded responds:

I wish I knew if you viewed this large or not.

The idea is that these are the survivors of a catastrophe. The one up front is looking at a dirty teddy bear he's found in the rubble. And the other two were checking out a hollow. The spacecraft jets were originally blue, but I changed the color because I thought this fit better, but maybe it still doesn't fit.

Thanks for the thoughtful review.

[Forest Master]

awsome

my new background, so thanx for that.

I love everything about it, but I have to be picky and the one small thing that 'annoys' me is that i see only one rope going to the right side of the bug

Savory responds:

I tried keeping the strings looking distinct from a distance, so there's fewer strings, but there's also less functionality when you look closely :|